Friday, January 16, 2009

Haiku#1

Broken,Shattered lay.

bones,houses,bonds-meant to stay...

dreams of nation swept away.

3 comments:

  1. Frankly, it's not so nice. I'd prefer to call it a 'Heck-u' poem. A doha could've been better. Though this one is much better than others i know.
    Based on communal divisions??

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  2. you have a nice blog over here...
    like your words...
    'My world of black' was goood
    will drop by again...

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  3. @Angel...
    Why don't you have a shout box here so that we can shout (that's what it's for).
    And that Aj is the 'storiesfromhell' guy. Happens to be my best friend.
    BTW, the haiku isn't so bad, i think now.

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